Dark roads of the mind

by Infernus   Dec 16, 2007


Dark roads he travels, but not of his choice.
As his sanity unravels he listens to the voice.
It wants him to take the life he holds dear.
Relentless and cold it plays on his fears.
Day after day it schemes and it lies.
Mile by mile his resistance to it dies.
At the end of the road a choice he must make.
Her life or his own which does he take.
"Why not both" the voice whispers with glee.
To his horror he finds he must agree.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Skyfire

    "Relentless and cold it plays on his fears.
    Day after day it schemes and it lies."

    I really liked these lines. Well done--short, but still very emotional.

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That's interesting. Short but definitely fits its length. Nice flow up til the end. I don't know about that last line. In a way it seems...a little off. But still it fits. Hmm I'll ignore that. Dark which suits this piece. I liked the content and how it plays together nicely.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    Thats freakin awesome!
    You have a nice flow, unbroken in your rhythm. *5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    See....I told you it was good. Now do not fear, write from within and more praise is sure to follow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Good starting... and i guess u can do it more better for ur next poem if ever! just keep it up and continue writing... great job of urs 5/5

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