by ari
This is a really good poem. |
Totally agree with Ari. Nothing much i can add to that :) |
Wow for one of your first poems this is amazing! keep up the good work! |
by Sweet lig
Good starting... and i guess u can do it more better for ur next poem if ever! just keep it up and continue writing... great job of urs 5/5 |
by Solus
See....I told you it was good. Now do not fear, write from within and more praise is sure to follow. |
by Brandon Lee
Thats freakin awesome! |
That's interesting. Short but definitely fits its length. Nice flow up til the end. I don't know about that last line. In a way it seems...a little off. But still it fits. Hmm I'll ignore that. Dark which suits this piece. I liked the content and how it plays together nicely. |
by Skyfire
"Relentless and cold it plays on his fears. |