Loving you alone.

by Helen   Dec 16, 2007


This forbidden love,
this incredible feeling,
is pulling me apart.
For so long;
for too long,
has it been a wish.
For those sweet words,
yet unspeakable words,
to slip from your mouth;
for me to catch,
and finally be freed from this spell
of loving you alone.

I hope you lot like this one :) iv actually been having trouble writing a thing so im really quiet pleased with this one.... yet i still had trouble with the title :P like normal.

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  • 16 years ago

    by eduard dionio

    I lik eit, smooth and simple and i can relate..keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Charlie

    This poems is beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    U came up good wit that.. I like this, u should put yo whole thought to think abt the title 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    The title was good my dear, along with the rest of the poem! I thought it was very good, especially for being so short.. I wish it kept going on. You did a great job! Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    This is a good poem. yeah im not sure about the title and i tried to think of one to reccomend but i couldnt. however it is a good poem. it is short but i like it. flows nicely. I like how u referref to it as a spell:) ur friend

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