This is a good poem. yeah im not sure about the title and i tried to think of one to reccomend but i couldnt. however it is a good poem. it is short but i like it. flows nicely. I like how u referref to it as a spell:) ur friend

The title was good my dear, along with the rest of the poem! I thought it was very good, especially for being so short.. I wish it kept going on. You did a great job! Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~

U came up good wit that.. I like this, u should put yo whole thought to think abt the title 5/5

This poems is beautiful!

I lik eit, smooth and simple and i can relate..keep writing