by Kayla Dec 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
You've been gone from my life, |
by ABake
Aww. I loved this peice. The attitude was strong. If that makes sense to you. I could sense your pain yet your stength to move on, which for me was amazing. I liked your form of the peice with the more lines in the stanza than the usual four lines. Your flow was also flawless. So overall, greatly penned write. 5.5 |