by Mandy Dec 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
What keeps you going on? |
by Broken smile
Great job!! I love the line where it says, 'these are our last goodbyes.' That line sticks in my head because for many, once broken up they don't stay your friend, so it would truly be your last goodbye. Keep up the great work!!! |
by xo kisses xo
Omgg. thats really awesome |
by Melly
I used to feel the same..so in a way i can relate. but great write. sad, but great job! |
by Kristi White
It seemed so... i dont know... lessened yet to the point and beautiful. i love that "because obviously with you is not where i belong". it sticks out to me. |
Its a good poems. |