Its a good poems.

An ur basiclly trelling my storey word to word
this happen to me!!

YOUR GOOD AT WRITTING POEMS KEEP IT UP :)

It seemed so... i dont know... lessened yet to the point and beautiful. i love that "because obviously with you is not where i belong". it sticks out to me.

I used to feel the same..so in a way i can relate. but great write. sad, but great job!

Omgg. thats really awesome
the rythem was good!
i loved it.
its my favorite one of yours.

<33ya!

Great job!! I love the line where it says, 'these are our last goodbyes.' That line sticks in my head because for many, once broken up they don't stay your friend, so it would truly be your last goodbye. Keep up the great work!!!