Wow very inspiring thoughts.. i'd love the way how u expressed all ur feelings here.. and i did really smile in the last lines... its quite touches my heart coz i felt it was truly comes to ur heart every words u wrote it here.. great concepts and the structures, and also the flow was great.. and i can relate at the same time... i really enjoyed,..

just keep it up and continue writing all what u feel..
5/5

Awwz that was rele cute!!!! and i can relate!!!

Wow, this poem left me speechless. It was a really good poem. I especially loved the ending line. I loved it so much! Very good poem. 5/5 all the way!

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Wow hunny this was just amazing! The beginning was just so beautiful, you described your emotions well and I could truly relate. The title really captured my attention because it captured what I am feeling. Well done *5/5*

I can relate to this in some ways.. u can feel the heartfelt in this when u read it. i ejoyed it very much. althought the second stanza seemed a bit forced.. overall it was a nice poem

This was really sweet. it was really emotional and i could feel the emotion behind it. well done!

Well its an enjoyable read .. and really appreciate some of the vocab choices..the expressed the feelings u have quite well.. the ending however was kinda choppy .. i wudve liked a more expressive ending .. but keep it up ..ur on teh right track
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This poem is really god i like it. keep up the good work

Wow. this poem was simply amazing.
wrods couldn't possibly describe how great i think it is. .
the flow was amazingly well done
and the imagery was flawless.

simply. a beautiful poem. :] 5/5.

Interesting poem.
You created great flow from the first line with good rhymes. You expressed feelings in a good way, through very vivid descriptions. I like sincerity of this poem, it sounds like it's coming straight from the heart which makes it very touching.
Keep up!
5/5

Awwz very sad poem
but it was very well written
and it had niice flow with a little rhyming which made the poem even better
keep up the great work!!

<3 i love you silly

This was amazing id have to say, it sucks when you find out you think that certain guy is the one they have a girlfriend and you stick with them for a little bit because its your crush you know, and sweetie, listen everyone has their match made in heaven even if it takes longer for you then someone else trust me im still looking :D

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Nice job, this one was good. I would give it a 4.5 only because the flow was lost jst a lil but clearly that can't be done so its worth more then a 4 so 5/5 from me.
Alot of emotion and a very relatable subject which hit close to home. Enjoyed this read well done love ur work.

Very inspiering thoughts, it was a good poem and i enjoyed the read

A sad piece to read, again I was hooked on the first few lines and just had to read more, I like the way this poem was written, great work, keep it up.

Very inspiring thought...
I liked the title too...
No problem with the flow...
Love the rhyme scheme too...
Another 5/5 job!!!

Good job.. i think you could have been a a bit more expressive for my taste, but not at all a bad poem... still a joy to read and the flow was beautiful

This poem is sooo inspiring and sooo cute.. i seriously love diz poem yo..

I like how you started and ended this poem.. your poems always have stories and it's really nice.. kudos for ya man.. nice one =]

Really Cute poem 5/5