Good poem.lots of emotion. keep it up |
by Christina
Wow very deep and meaningful......5/5 i take it its bout that boi u broke up wit? |
by Sarahh
Thats really sad.. i liked it tho... my biggest fear is to bleed... ive gotten so close.. me and my guy have been together for a year.. he use to be REALLY sweet.. for my bday he covered my bed in roses and got me a teddy bear as big as me that was holding a pillow heart with a necklace around it.... and then things happened.. and he isnt the same...... oh and thanks for the comment on my poem. |
I like how it goes straight to the point! |