Omg i loved that sooooo much!!! that poem is just like me and my ex!!! i wuz all in love wit that fool. lol anywayz, good job!!!
n if u ever want 2 talk, just send me a message!!! :-)

Your work is very very good...you just need to count your syllables a little more so that it flows better. I enjoy the way you say things though, it's what keeps me reading. And I greatly appreciate your comments!
*ME*

Aww this was so cute

Great poem! i love it!
thanks for the comment!

Great poem ^^ im glad your with someone that you care for so much ^^ 5/5

Thats so cute! if i only believed that there was such thing as a perfect man but i liked the flow of the song and i give it a / !props!