That was a great way to sum up life... I really enjoyed it, so happy that you wrote something else. Great Great work,
As you might say, Fantabu- something or other , i've no idea how to spell it.

Anyways keep up the great work-
happy holidays
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Very funny. You need to work on your rhyming though and the word Roller-Coaster was said waaay too much. The flow was a little shaky too.

You have a very different way of seeing things and saying them. It's very intriguing whilst reading it, so keep the creativity coming. Excellent work Jackson. We have golf this afternoon... and swimming, so let Shelly know. I'm looking forward to it. 5/5!!!

-Jean <3