Comments : Dream Lover (Collab RTVW)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This really turned out great. It was fun doing this in the club. Thanks for joining in.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Perfect collab poem with all good writers contibuting there best.
    A enjoyable read, well penned.
    As dawn's grey light approaches
    with leaded heart I find
    an empty space beside me
    you were a figment of my mind.

    Loved this stanza most.

    Regards
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It was a pleasure working together with you on this poem, Nitin!

    hugs,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very nice collab my friend. hope all finds you well. best wishes ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love this collab! I like to see the different styles and reminisce of the ones no longer with us......