You Can't Keep Doing This To Me! <3
by Christina Dec 17, 2007
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Why do you always do this to me? You tell me you love me. We start to kiss. Kissing leads to making out. Making out leads to other stuff. And after everything that happens. You just stop talking to me. And when you do talk to me, you're mean. Two weeks go by and you finally talk to me like nothing ever happened. But it did. You act like nothing happened. But it did. And you start to hold me and touch me the way you used to before we did anything. And I can't take much more. I'm breaking down. And I love you and I think that's why it's so hard for me to deal with it. I love you but you can't keep doing this to me! |
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16 years ago
by Kaila
I'm wondering why
you didn't put this into poem form
I mean
why you left it in a paragraph
I think it was good
but some readers might not like the style
I thought it was okay
just not my taste
these boy problems of yours seem rough
just know
if you ever need a helping hand
pm me at any time
5/5
kaila -
16 years ago
by TracyM
Nicely written, though I think the fact that the poem is all "clumped" together didnt give the full "effect" of what you had written, maybe if it had breaks in it? good job though, flowed nicely
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16 years ago
Another great story, maybe it should have been a short story, not a poem. It's also greatly written by you. You really know how to write. it's 5/5!!!
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16 years ago
Unforunately guys sometime do this to women and I hate it. Gives the rest of us a bad reputation.
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16 years agoby Not
You already know from my poems i been through the same kind of situations all we can do is try to move on but anyways i love this poem too keep writing...love always..xoxo...=)
