Hmm how so touch piece! the emotion was great just kee p it up

Awwz thx!

What an emotional piece

it shows how some people abuse love into getting their physical satisfactions

really impressive

good luck

Her Guardian

I liked reading this but it seemed to have repeat it self in a way.. so re read this and u will see wht im talkin about.. but overall i can relate and know this feeling.i rated this a 4

Aww touching because it's so emotional and streight from heart.I really hope you are not really going this through but if you are be strong enough to figth it, fight him, because he is useing you and if you don't want it, move on.
You could turn this to an amazing poem once again, but so far I quess this is how you write and don't stop doing your thing! :)
5/5 Great work!

I think this is more of a release of thoughts and emotions rather than it being a poem. I believe if you gave it structure and cut down on your reptititions then this would be a great piece.

"Two weeks go by and you finally talk to me like nothing ever happened. But it did. You act like nothing happened. But it did"
^you're saying the same thing over again and it throws off the flow.

*4/5*

Aww i like this too

Very good write. Good usage of emotion. A release of thoughts. 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kISsEs

I like this poem....It describes how i feel good job! i give it a 4

Great job on this one, this one is my favorite, for some reason, there is so much emotion put into so little words...just beautiful 5/5

Awe. hun, i know exactly how this feels.
and itz not a very good feeling.
but if someone treats you this badly.
then he's not worth your time.

great poem. .5/5.

Aww. I liked this. The emotions are being released, but I sense a bit of repitition. I can feel your anger, but try rewording things instead of saying them again and again. Still a heartfelt peice. Great job!

Amber :]]

This was a really good poem. Short, and emotional. But, it had a couple of mistakes. It was really good though. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

The message was nice but dont know about the flow.. i think its a bit off but thought still the emotions carrying it ... keep it up!

You already know from my poems i been through the same kind of situations all we can do is try to move on but anyways i love this poem too keep writing...love always..xoxo...=)

Unforunately guys sometime do this to women and I hate it. Gives the rest of us a bad reputation.

Another great story, maybe it should have been a short story, not a poem. It's also greatly written by you. You really know how to write. it's 5/5!!!

Nicely written, though I think the fact that the poem is all "clumped" together didnt give the full "effect" of what you had written, maybe if it had breaks in it? good job though, flowed nicely

I'm wondering why
you didn't put this into poem form
I mean
why you left it in a paragraph
I think it was good
but some readers might not like the style
I thought it was okay
just not my taste
these boy problems of yours seem rough
just know
if you ever need a helping hand
pm me at any time
5/5
kaila