Moment

by etraaam   Dec 17, 2007


If you hadn't already, i guess that was the moment..

that moment when our eyes met,
and we stared at each other,
longer than ever before.

I swear in those few seconds,
that felt so long,
i felt you through my whole body.

All i wanted was to stay lost in your eyes,
and ask you what you wanted,
you made me shiver.

When you moved your eyes in another direction,
i kept on looking for a second or two,
didn't want to let go.

But in that moment when u looked away,
i guess you had an answer to my unsaid question.
..in that moment you decided who u wanted.

& i'm sorry it wasn't me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    I can so relate to this poem! its good! i cant wait to hear more from you!!!

    love Emmy

  • 17 years ago

    by etraaam

    Thank u both!=D
    really glad to hear u like it =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Biya

    ECH !! , A lovely poem though a sad ending ! U fell in sincere love and wanted to see in ur lover's eyes but ur lover was stupid who lost so sincere love which just happened within seconds by seeing in eyes and such love which happens in only few seconds always a sincere love !!A vote for u !!
    Good creativity !!
    Biya

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