by Italian Stallion Dec 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Christmas mornings |
This was soo sad... you kept me reading and reading. I loved the story and there was so much emotion. I cant believe.... I cant imagine... that was just so well written... |
by Kaila
Aww |
This is sooo long. i dont rlly like readin poems bout holidays but this was a nice one. i did enjoy it all together. great poem |
by Blissful
I loved the ending stanza! It was a perfect way to end your wonderful piece. The short stanzas were effecitve and the flow was flawless. I loved the repitition because it was important in getting your message across. Well done *5/5* |
Aww. Very beautiful piece. It was so sad, though. Not as I expected. But, I loved the story to it.. beautiful. So much emotion and wow, the ending really caught me :] |