Very well done, kept me reading, 5/5

Wow, Joe. I really liked this. A few spots seemed a bit off, but I'm sure when it's sung it's flawless. (:
[I'm like that when I read songs - I try to like imagine it and it gets all crazy]

You're a wonderful writer, and every poem/song proves me [and others] right. (:

Keep it up, darling.
5/5

Aww. This was so sad. Whether you read it in a poem or a song way it's still beautiful. Very heartfelt and written with plenty of emotion. I loved it. Great job! 5.5

Amber :]]

Aww. Very beautiful piece. It was so sad, though. Not as I expected. But, I loved the story to it.. beautiful. So much emotion and wow, the ending really caught me :]

Good job, hun. Keep it up.

I loved the ending stanza! It was a perfect way to end your wonderful piece. The short stanzas were effecitve and the flow was flawless. I loved the repitition because it was important in getting your message across. Well done *5/5*

This is sooo long. i dont rlly like readin poems bout holidays but this was a nice one. i did enjoy it all together. great poem

Aww
it kind of made me sad just for the fact that it was a sad song... the flow was just a tad off for me. The last stanza was by far my favorite one. It was put together very nicely. You did an excellent job with that part. nice poem
5/5
kaila

This was soo sad... you kept me reading and reading. I loved the story and there was so much emotion. I cant believe.... I cant imagine... that was just so well written...