Scars

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Dec 17, 2007


Uneasily hidden scars.
Unhideable crimson tears
A heart as black as night.
Uncontrollable frightening fears.

Sleep is against her.
Her eyes wide awake.
Her face half - covered.
She knows her mistake.

Her emotions are mixed.
Unstable and unsteady.
She's completely confused.
And for the truth, she's not ready.

Disappointed and depressed.
Frustrated and regretful.
Angry and annoyed.
Pathetic and remorseful.

She wants to curl up in a ball.
And cry her eyes dry.
Never to be seen again.
Never to love another guy.

Her silent cries go unheard.
Her quiet tears are unseen.
She wakes up every morning.
Wishing it was all a just dream.

She walks around all day.
No smile or sign of joy.
A frown and tears to drown in.
For being treated like a toy.

She's being withered down inside.
And she refuses to eat.
She's losing everything she's got.
And this fight, she cannot beat.

She's losing all she cares about.
And her life has got no purpose.
To slit her wrist and cut her vein.
Would show her nothing more but bliss.

Her pain stays inside.
Her existence is forbidden.
Her emotions, she'll hide.
And her scars remain hidden.

© 2007 WilTED.

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  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Loved how you repeated the title in the end and had it in the beginning. I think the last stanza is the most powerful. This poem was VERY well written.
    6th stanza, last line 'a just' should be 'just a'
    Otherwise, amazing!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    Once again you manage to amaze me..I can tell you've been through much.From your happy poems to your sad poems i love them all.However this one is very...Indescribable..i like the ending.Scars on her wrist and cutting to feel pain and her vein bleeds...Reminds me a little of........me
    ~Jo Anna El

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I don't like poems that include cutting, but they kind of attract me anyway. I wonder why people do it, just as I wonder why people starve themselves or puke, and so on.

    "Her silent cries are unheard.
    Her quiet tears are unseen."

    That might sound better has 'cries go unheard'
    because 'are' is in there two times in such a shortperiod of time.

    Wonderful job once again.
    I know something that NONE of your poems[i'vereadsofar] are missing and that's emotion. xD

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    A great piece....
    a sad and filled of deep emotions...
    a very interesting story and message
    a very creative work and great imagery

    thats all i say about this works...
    keep it up and i really enjoyed all ur poems

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, you're pretty good to write these sad poems. This showed a lot of feeling in this. You did a great job with this one. 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

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