Aww heartbreaking piece, very touching. So emotional, that sad atmosphere just crawled in my soul.
Amazing work on this!
5/5 Keep writing!

That was such an amazing poem. i loved the emotion you put into the poem, it sounded like you really meant what you said in it. great write, it was a brilliant poem. 5*5
Kimberly

Awwz thats rele sad but very well written...it had a good flow to it!!!5/5

Can totally relate;
Awesome poem...
5/5

Wow, you're pretty good to write these sad poems. This showed a lot of feeling in this. You did a great job with this one. 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

A great piece....
a sad and filled of deep emotions...
a very interesting story and message
a very creative work and great imagery

thats all i say about this works...
keep it up and i really enjoyed all ur poems

5/5

I don't like poems that include cutting, but they kind of attract me anyway. I wonder why people do it, just as I wonder why people starve themselves or puke, and so on.

"Her silent cries are unheard.
Her quiet tears are unseen."

That might sound better has 'cries go unheard'
because 'are' is in there two times in such a shortperiod of time.

Wonderful job once again.
I know something that NONE of your poems[i'vereadsofar] are missing and that's emotion. xD

5.5

Once again you manage to amaze me..I can tell you've been through much.From your happy poems to your sad poems i love them all.However this one is very...Indescribable..i like the ending.Scars on her wrist and cutting to feel pain and her vein bleeds...Reminds me a little of........me
~Jo Anna El

Loved how you repeated the title in the end and had it in the beginning. I think the last stanza is the most powerful. This poem was VERY well written.
6th stanza, last line 'a just' should be 'just a'
Otherwise, amazing!
5/5