I thought this line was a little weak..
Do you know the difficulty pretending provides

I like the ryhme and line following but not the inro...The first and the last verses are good as well. keep up the good work

This poem is now in my favorites. I absolutley love it. I can definitley relate to this right now, about how I try not to show that I love the dude. =) Anyway, this poem is amazing, and it has some pretty strong emotions.

-Taylor