Awe, this was so sad and so long. I loved it.

This is deep. I love it. I think you are a very good poet 5/5

I fell really hard for this piece. The title I must start of with saying is amazing, "Dead before death" it portrayed so much emotion just with the title and really grasped onto my interest. Such a deep poem which captured my heart and poured touching emotions into my soul. From start til finish you kept my interest and the flow ran smoothe throughout it. I love non rhyme poems these days so it's great to be reading one written so well. An enjoyable read. Well done. ~Mel