by firexdancer Dec 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Who knew? |
Usually I prefer stanzas, but every poem I've read by you is so captivating that I don't care that they're not in stanzas. You draw me in and make me feel all of your emotion. |
by Kitten
Great poem i loved the line "I learned that wishes don't come true" it is so true |
I consider this a "Poetic write" instead of a poem. You used your feelings and wrote them out without an actual style. Which always turns out amazing, much like this. I loved it, it was very strong and flowing with emotion! 5/5 |
by Kayla
Wow, Gab... such a powerful poem! To be honest, I had no idea you could write like this with how cheerful and happy you always seem to be. I do love this poem very much! I could tell it came straight from the heart and was very deep. The emotions were so intense, I could feel them pouring out of the poem... great job! I love ya girlie, keep up the amazing job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 |
Wow alot can relate but still you have your own view on things which is good i loved this write great job gabby, 5/5 |