Notice her

by desperately needing you   Dec 18, 2007


No one cared if she was gone
no one would notice if something was wrong
she could got o school with a gun to her head
and people would say she would be better off dead
she could take a knife right to her heart
but no one would notice it fell apart
she could cry everyday until she lost her breath
but her only way out is death
she could never leave and stay in bed
but have you notice this whole time shes been dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by desperately needing you

    Kjgl ksjregjy````

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This poem is really good, it makes you think about that one girl/guy that are always alone, with no one to sit with at lunch, the ones that spend the weekends alone..
    I really liked it..
    take care x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sadia

    . Good Job . :)
    Its very good, like Lexi said .
    The flow and rhythm is bit not ..
    if u understand
    otherwise ' .
    K.I.P .

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