Comments : Notice her

  • 16 years ago

    by Sadia

    . Good Job . :)
    Its very good, like Lexi said .
    The flow and rhythm is bit not ..
    if u understand
    otherwise ' .
    K.I.P .

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This poem is really good, it makes you think about that one girl/guy that are always alone, with no one to sit with at lunch, the ones that spend the weekends alone..
    I really liked it..
    take care x

  • 16 years ago

    by desperately needing you

    Kjgl ksjregjy````