Wonderful! this was really sweet and very sincere! i can fell how u express ur emotions here.. i can truly relate this lines

What can i say
Except "I love you"
You've won my heart over
What else can i do

how sweet yah... love the feelings when someone will tell me those words...

great imagery and thoughts.. 5/5

Awwz i liike it....i love the flow and its very well written....5/5

Wow.. this is a very good poem. i loved it.. u have 1 miss spelling...

You've slowly but shurly
made you way in to my heart
And now that i have you
I cant picture us apart

you needs to b your.. but overall its a great poem. great job!!!

Hey its a cute poem,, its almost like a song.. but i would have liked to know more... as in the poem should have been a little longer on its description.. but its really sweet ,, am giving it a five.. :D

Another good piece. Fanstatic flow of words and good usage of rhyme. Very good job
5/5

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