Wow, I loved your choice of words in this poem. You decribed your feelings in ways I haven't seen until now.
"Inside I am turning
Stormy and black with butterflies"
and..
"And makes it bleed
With unspoken tears."

Great job! It was a very nice poem that I honestly enjoyed reading a lot. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more from you someday. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~