Lol it did not feel like a funny poem, so I must admit I cheated and skipped to the bottom before readint the whole thing. very nice Gem lol I enjoyed it.

Lol what and was i thinking :P
A very very funny poem, enjoyed its climax lol.

Take care
chavii.

Gem
Don't know how I missed this one....I think someone posted so many before yours it got pushed to the second page. Love the way it sounds like your describing somethig else...then the switch up...lol
Good job!
Love Cindy

I don't see how it was a funny poem either. But beautiful nonetheless.

I haven't written anything in forever, but today I did. And I enjoyed reading your poems to inspire me.

Alex.

Omg that kept me on my toes i thought i t was your husband otr soemthing lol

This poem is nice I love it...=)

Lol i would have never thought about a sofa lol. Dang lol weird ideas keep going on lmao!!

Hehe this was great!! you had me fooled until the very end =)

I hope i find a sofa as good as yours.the that makes me depress when i have to leave..mattr of fact when i sit down i don't feel like getting back up...but i love this poem its so funny,cute thoughtful even though its about a sofa or should i say thee sofa!!...=)

ROFL the suspense almost killed me and then the end just threw me on the floor.

Great Work

^Men^

Hehehe... great poem... at first I was like oh no she's leaving him... and then its a sofa and I laughed sooo hard... lol

I have to admit you got me! I`m sitting here thinking "OH NO" her and the guy in the picture broke up and they seemed so perfect......Great job,perfect ending.

You know what...I know this is a funny piece but it's something that is REALLY sad HAHAHA My family had these couches for a very long time and when it was time to get rid of them everyone was a little broken up about it.
NICE!!!!

Great entrance~

The house feels so empty without you
Everything seems so out of place
You were always there to lean upon

It's climatic. Nice poem, 5/5. Keep on writting.

The house feels so empty without you
Everything seems so out of place
[The house feels so empty without you
everything's so out of place]
- For some odd reason I wasn't fond with the usage of "seems" I think that it didn't connect well with the word "feel". Maybe because of the double -e? It's just my opinion, though.

You were always there to lean upon
To cuddle up to
Always so warm and inviting
[You were always there to lean upon,
to cuddle up to, so warm and inviting]
- The second line seemed a bit too short and the next line used 'always' again. And, it messed with the flow for me.

Never complained when I was angry
And threw things at you
- I liked these lines. They make the poem original. I don't think I've ever read a poem where people apologized for throwing things at someone else. I'm sure they're out there, but I like the idea of it. Makes it a bit more direct. And, I like when people make poems direct, as long as they're not over doing it.

You were always there with open arms
You looked proud and touch
[You were always there with open arms
You looked proud and touchED]
- I'm guessing you mean 'touched'. I'm not quite sure, but that's what I'm assuming by the lines before and after.

You were fading away, became so pale
[You were fading away, becoming so pale]
OR
[You were fading away, you became so pale.]

Hahaha. I honestly did NOT expect the ending. I didn't even realize that it was under funny poems, which is odd because there's bright yellowing surrounding the loss of something. Fifteen years is a LONG time for a couch, I've seen them last 9 or 10 but not 15. You must take excellent care of your things. Which is good! (:

Cute poem, Gem. Really cute.