Comments : Tape Them Shut

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I cannot help but to believe that there is a real person in which these harsh comments are aimed. I am in the mood for harsh comment because many times they are deserved sorry I cannot think of any that fit your poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Haha I loved it. Way to many people dont lisson. This poem shows that. Everything about this poem was great. Keep up the wonderful work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again perfectly flawless

    Tried countless times to tell you that I wasn't interested
    But the words never made it through your concrete head
    Disgusted me every time I looked into those deceiving eyes
    So tape them shut honey, I don't want to see your lies

    This is my favorite staza the power the witty scarsim, the anger, everything fit togather so well, again you have done an outstanding job, please keep up the good work for the world would be at a tragic loss without your written words 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Alot of your work is pretty hard almost additudic by nature and wonder if you carry the same chip on your shoulders as you portray in your work just a thought.