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by Jenni Marie Dec 18, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / other
Countless people are slowly dying From wars that shouldn't be fought Fighting for country and freedom Yet their soul's have been bought People getting mugged every day Just so addicts can get a hit It's true they have a problem Yet this they can not admit Brothers murdering sisters Friends turning upon friends So many innocent life's taken Coming to such an abrupt end Abuse victims left in despair Pain so intense that it burns No one for them to talk to There is nowhere left to turn Victims of cruel bullying Hating everything they are What happened to their dreams When they were gonna be a star? People getting away with crimes The law has become total disarray Seems that it urgently needs updating Or more life's will be lost this way Do these harsh words shock you? Didn't think society was so bad? And then you all wonder why Society always makes me sad I'm sure you'll forget my words Put them to the back of your mind After all it isn't your problem That the world is so unkind So you continue what you're doing Staying oblivious to everything But try to remember these words: Anger's become the brand new thing
by PygmyPuff
Eep it horrible! No Im kidding, thats an aboslute lie. Its great. It makes the reader think. {5/5} [PygmyPuff]
by Lecrissa
Oh wow.... Strong imagey, Excelent flow, Hooks you in from start to finish. 5/5 in my book...L.S. Moore