Have I Told You LLately That I Loathe You?

by Jenni Marie   Dec 18, 2007


You keep gazing at me with that disgusting leering smile,
Don't you know your so called charm no longer works?
I'm easily able to see through your -Honest- deceiving eyes,
Find it so effortless to read through your carefully woven lies,
(Yet you keep trying, trying always to convince me to stay)

Honey, how about you start to face up to harsh reality,
Really could not give a damn about you anymore,
Sick and tired of your countless counterfeit words,
Nothing you ever said had even a dash of truth in it,
(So stay away from me, I don't want to know)

Seems that you have become just one more statistic,
Another pathological liar wrapped in untruthful words,
One more cracked heart; no consideration for others,
I'm curious; do you believe the lies you dress yourself up in?
(Stop trying to sway me, unlike you i have morals.)

People say There's a fine line between love and hate,
Got to admit they hit the nail on the head with that one,
Loved you more than life; now don’t care if you drop dead,
Then i'I'dever have to see that idiotic smug face again,
(Don't you get it yet? darling; I loathe you)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was another very powerful poem that had alot of good vocabulary and you played it to the hilt. I love how you summed it up at the end and I would say I have to give this one a 5 great work Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Is there a reason why you have two L's in the word Lately in the title? Just wondering.

    Great write, you truly have a lot of talent. The flow was good as well as the structure. But for some reason I didn't connect with this one like your others, I just felt it was Okay.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Such fierce anger, drips from ever single line, powerful, flawless, orgnail, and a wonderful read. I enjoy reading your work, it is diffrent from most poems on here and i agree it should be published. amazingly well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved it. once again strong message and wording. The flow was great. I loved the format. It was a great poem. I did see two things that you could look at

    2nd stanza 2nd line I think it would sound better if it started with "I".

    last stanza 3rd line there is a typo "don�t" should be "dont"

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    These poems should not only win a contest they should be published and available in a printed book I am enjoying all of them If I was a master poet perhaps I could explain

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