Loved the rhyming in this one. It was splendid! You have such a way with words that I want to be able to write the same way you do it's fantastic! Again I love relating to your poems...I feel like this is almost one of my own pieces because it fits so much wonderful job indeed!
5/5
Kaila

First, I loved the form. If that is what you want to call it. The way that you used certain symbols to add extra emotion to certain words or lines. If that makes sense. The emotion was deep and the flow was smooth throughout the whole peice. I loved it all. Overall, a beautifully written peice. Great job!
5.5

Amber...

Oh my... I absolutely love this. there was so much anger and sarcasm running off of each word.
spectacular, just spectacular :]
The flow was smooth, there wasn't an unnessecary break in the poem. Your word usage was wisely chosen, and your emotinos were top notch.

"I'm easily able to see through your -Honest- deceiving eyes"
- i love what you chose to do with 'honest', it was very creative thinking done on your part. :)

"Honey, how about you start to face up to harsh reality,
Really could not give a damn about you anymore,"
- between these two lines i personally felt the flow was a little rocky. i would have put "I really could not give a damn about you anymore". to me, it smoothed the flow back out.

"Seems that you have become just one more statistic,
Another pathological liar wrapped in untruthful words,"
- amazing choice of wording there. truly astounding.

You did an amazing job, m'dear. :)
Definately worth a 5/5.

- Steph. xx

These poems should not only win a contest they should be published and available in a printed book I am enjoying all of them If I was a master poet perhaps I could explain

I loved it. once again strong message and wording. The flow was great. I loved the format. It was a great poem. I did see two things that you could look at

2nd stanza 2nd line I think it would sound better if it started with "I".

last stanza 3rd line there is a typo "don�t" should be "dont"

5/5

Such fierce anger, drips from ever single line, powerful, flawless, orgnail, and a wonderful read. I enjoy reading your work, it is diffrent from most poems on here and i agree it should be published. amazingly well done 5/5

Is there a reason why you have two L's in the word Lately in the title? Just wondering.

Great write, you truly have a lot of talent. The flow was good as well as the structure. But for some reason I didn't connect with this one like your others, I just felt it was Okay.

Peace, Joe

This was another very powerful poem that had alot of good vocabulary and you played it to the hilt. I love how you summed it up at the end and I would say I have to give this one a 5 great work Plot121