Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! It was exactly how I feel right now sort of or how I felt a couple days ago. I love how all of your poems I have read so far relate to me in some way I think that's just the coolest thing. I loved your vocabulary, it wasn't too much or too little it was just perfect so great job. I can honestly say that I liked the whole thing not one flaw in my opinion. Wonderful!
5/5
Kaila

Another great write! the vocabulary and the flow was simply amazing. your poem shows such passion and emotion.
and i feel like this as well. sometimes it's too much. but i manage.
great poem. 5/5.

I love it... It is filled with excellently expressed emotions and passion that runs wildly through the last few stanzas. Truly great write, very captivating, with good flow. I like your choice of words and descriptions from the beginning to the end, and I could feel everything you wrote about.
My favorite stanza is:

-And as you run to meet me under the stars, fall into your arms
Trembling with ecstasy as you trail kisses across my face
Moonbeams beaming down on us, creating a sparkling glow
Shivering not from cold, but from complete delight and joy-
^^
Very vivid, passionate and beautiful.

Keep up!

Very interesting piece, you wrote it on so creative and passionate way. Few lines are absolutely breath-taking and whole poem has very original tone, I enjoyed in every line. Your wording in this poem is also impressing, and you created very captivating rhythm in it, and it totally keeps reader's attention.
Well done, amazing job!

Again, another amazing write. I loved the emotion yet again, and you took a horrid topic and turned it into a great write. The flow was pretty good again, and I really did enjoy this poem.