Wonderful piece of work you've got here. I really enjoyed how even though you idn't rhyme it didn't sound awkward or I guess it didn't feel like you needed to rhyme. I also liked it bcause I can totally relate to this piece so it was good to read a poem like that. I'm not sure if I like that it ends with a question but who cares just my opinion. But great job
5/5
Kaila

WOW very good....i liiked the flow of the poem and the great vocabually u used....and when u used it the poem sounded good still....5/5

This was an amazing piece. and i really liked the wording of your poem. .itz dark. but alluring. these 4 stanzas say so much. i been through this. but a difference [big difference] is that i dont wanna kill him. im just stuck on him. "/ but this poem was simple amazing. so amazing to the point where i cant even BEGIN to describe how great i think it is. :] 5/5.

Very creepy had to read it twice is was so good. I don't genrealy like dark poems but you managed to pull me in and want to keep reading. Well done.....L.S. Moore

Wow... This is different from anything I've read before. Greatly written poem, so original and filled with emotions that I could actually feel while I was reading it. You managed to create such effective and intense atmosphere from the beginning to the end. Truly powerful.
My favorite stanza is:

-What would you do if you knew what I were thinking?
That sometimes I imagine your blood splattered all around me?
That I visualize the many different ways to murder you
Without feeling any pangs of regret or remorse?-

Keep writing!

Very unique and powerful, you expressed your emotions, frustration and rage on a truly excellent way. Rhythm of whole poem is effective and intense and every stanza is filled with so many different feelings. I enjoyed while I was reading this poem, it shows that you are very talented and atmosphere that you created in it is deep and captivating. I really love this piece.

This was an amazing poem! It left me completely speechless! You have a lot of talent! The imagery and emotion were so strong. You took so much pain and sadness and put it into a great piece of writing, and the flow was pretty good! Keep up the amazing work