Comments : Hi Valentine

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Great use of words; it's short and to the point but doesn't take away from your message. The last two lines were especially dramatic.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    Lol. This is so funny. I think it should have been in the funny section instead of dark. You did a nice job. I needed to laugh. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Nice poem but valentines day is about loooooove