It's such a wonderful poem where we can see those emotions and feelings weaved in such a way that keeps the reader bound to complete the poem without noticing any imperfections.

good luck

Her Guardian

This is really great reflection! it really has a very nice imagery and it flowed fabulous! unpredictable thoughts u have made in this.. it was truly expressed the words and sounds kinda unique style.. the whole concepts and even the structures was great! i love the way how u expressed it.. 5/5

and keep it up!

Deapth sounds heavenly .. and so does your poem... and i really appreciated the different ways in which u have arranged the poem .. very very good indeed.. kudos to u...

That was amazing i think these would make a very beautiful song and if your a good singer maybe you could become the next pop-star! amazing song and i give it a 5/5 !props!

The warmth in my soul
With tears and ice, is replaced

^^Such an enchanting line, for a dark song, it forms an interesting image of pain.

These reflections
Conceal me in truth
These reflections
Cast me to the sky
These reflections
Whisk me away
These reflections
Bury me alive

^^ I think this is my favorite part, I like the repetition and how it changes from a semi light thought to a dark one.

I love the rhythm throughout and how the lyrics flow. This is beautifully crafted.