A fire passion burned

by damont   Dec 19, 2007


We started strangers to each others world.
we saw one another and instantly fell in love
making our worlds collide and burn
but making our passion a phonix
making it rise from the ashes to rise above
distance and time couldn't prevent us
this was a time where there was no lust
but a truth so strong it became a lie
our relatioship was born only to die
forgotten about this so great a love
that reality couldn't accept two perfect doves
as if time was put in reverse for the two of us
but this time it became a time of lust
and our eyes blinded by what fate served
so we didn't see each other the same way
to fall in love
so our worlds never crashed or burned
so the phonix never rose
and our lives never became one

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    This started off so full of love and a beautiful explination of it, then it changed, to the unruley unfortunate events of what can occur with it. I like the way you described the love in the beginning, then in the end it all failed, or was never there like you thought it was. Showed great emotion from bliss to sadness. Great piece, flowed well and had a point.

    Tammie xo

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    Wow, this is amazing :] you did a good job. i love how i didn't expect the ending how it wasn't really there you know i believe thats how it was told.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

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