Breathless

by KJ   Dec 19, 2007


My love...

Your captivating smile
Your off the wall style
Your sexy voice
Your nonchalant poise
Your intimate conversation
Your unmindful flirtation
Your hypnotizing eyes
Your innocent lies
Your crazy persona
Your beautiful aurora

Everything about you has me falling daily for you
I cant help but to do all the things that i do
To show you that Im so in love and your the best thing that has happened to me
Never take your love away, I need you to breathe
Without you life is not worth living and my heart is darkness
You fill me with peace, love, and happiness.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written complementary poem
    I love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Ken

    I did a extra one for u juss becuz i like how u write. this one is no different from the others i read...5/5*.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Aww, thats too cute :]
    I like it! It's different [in a good way]

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Great poem!
    i like the repition and all of the great decriptive words you used :)!
    5/5 deffinately :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A wonderful detailed celebration of your love.
    The repetetive statements with its explaination was a unique way to express such a wonderful emotion!!

    Well done 5/5

    Michael