by Marc Ortiz
I hope this is not true.. well I believe it was written from your heart. The flow was smooth and the rhyming words was great. Keep it up! :D And thanks for the comment :) I really appreciate it :) it made me smile =D |
by damont
Hey wonderful poem. excellent. i feel your pain. lol its clear. keep writing |
by Mommy And Me
Wow. i really loved this poem. it brought back memories of my past... haha... good work dear. you can touch anyones heart with this piece... everyone looses some one to their very own vegas |