by Andree Dec 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In her bed. With dead arms weighing her down. Those tiny monsters so heavy. So strong. Like first words. And last ones. Or everything in between that makes either matter. Telling the stories in raw alarms. Woken up to nothing. And everyone. Broken metaphors. The pencil too close to the paper. The moment too deep inside her. They're gone, but still there. |
This flowed really well :) |
by Manish
I agree with all the previous comments made. I don't know exactly what you were referring to, but I am sure the purpose was immaculately done. |
by Skyfire
I'm not sure i understand, but i really loved the words you used to explain. Beautiful language. |
by Solus
Hmm...quite good. I like the structure of it. |