Sad. |
by Anonymous
Wow you've got potential, this was good but I can tell you didn't spend much time on it. you're a good poet and if you keep on writing i'm sure you will be pro. =). |
by she
Wow, the last stanza has a lot emotion, i like it |
by Fear2love
The poem emotion, which is real to do, so i give you props for that |
All i can say is WOW!!!! Keep it up!!! |
by rachel
Awesome. |
Very good job very emotional though...its seems you have gaven up on everything when you really shouldn't the most. life is really vaulable once you find your place yes it is difficult but everyone can others it takes longer but you will....i havn't quite found mine but i know i will and im not giving up no matter how much people make me wanna theres only a few that make me feel accepted but not much...good poem 5/5 |
by william
I relate 2 parts and others frighten me. |
by Empty Space
A great poem! |
by REESEY
I LOVED YOUR POEM......I CANT BELIEVE HOW MUCH IT RELATES TO ME...ITS KINDA SCARY... |