I can realate i love the poem

Awwz thats a rele sad poem but very well written

The "I'm so sick" was repeated a lot, which isn't bad for that line - but you have the word "me" in there quite often; too often I suppose. But, maybe that's the point?

"I feel like the sky when its raining.
I feel like snow when its falling."
^^that was my favorite part of the whole thing. Very good write. I can totaly relate to this sometimes, I actually think that everyone can that's what makes it so great. It shows great emotion and the language you used was superb! =} Perfectly written
5/5

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