This is really good...I like it lots...keep writing..<3 =]

I loved it!!! you gave alot of emtion and it felt so real. Great job i give it a 5/5

laura

This poems makes me get a feeling of great emotion. I loved it so much. It is a true, special love poem. It kinda inspired me to keep writing my novel. Thanks a bunch. If you want, could you message me.

Julie

Wow.. this was good for your first poem on the site I can't wait for you to write more because I want to see how much improvement you have after being on this site for awhile
great start
5/5
kaila

This is an amazingly written poem. The wording and rhym were perfect. You did a wonderful job on this poem. 5/5

Kalee

Well.. i appreciate the very realisitc subject ur dealing wid here.. but poetry is more than narration. at present ur poem reads more like a song.. u can do much much more .. its already pretty gud.. try emoting more.. thats wat makes poetry fun :)

Very nice thoughts i can feel those deep words. the whole lines are perfect expressed.. great starting .. just keep it up and continue writing all what u feel.. great job 5/5

The line "Her beauty is like a artist's work of art.And her voice is the kind that melts a guys heart." is really sweet and not to mention really well writen

That was really good! im glad your friend told u to post on here bc ur poems r rly good

:) I like this. It's saying something... mostly about you. And other things, of course! How you're someone who believes in love and are a good person. :) I gave you a 5/5. :)

Wow Cale.

--This looks familuar!
;]

Didn't you show me thiss? haha.

This poem's adorable.
& If your still havein' this problem.

I'm here.

<3
Lauran

Wow, so sweet. you should totally show this to the girl it is written for! best of luck! <3

I liked it once again but i think that you kinda but the wrong punctuation in it. You dont want ppl stoping every sentence you have to make it flow like your sentences do! But over all i did like it!

I'm totally having the same problem, but of course its about a guy.
loved this one 5/5

Wow that wuz great
i loved it
thats how i feel about this dude that goes to my skool
he has a gf :[
it sucks
i hate knowing he loves her
but neways
5/5
great poem

This is a very good poem. i give it a 10. i can relate to it in a way. but insted of a girl it is a guy.

Aww........really sweet.....

"Her beauty is like a artist's work of art.
And her voice is the kind that melts a guys heart"
^^ i totaly love the similie and metaphor u used here!

great job!

5/5
<3 Aly

THiS ONE iS REALLYYy GOoD i WiSH A GYyYE WOULD RiGGHT THiS FOR ME

I love your poem!!!! its full of emtion and its really sweet it seemed like you like that girl it was really good 5/5

Good write. May sound funny, but I thought exactly the same thing "way back when" so I can relate to this one....