Comments : The girl i cant have

  • 15 years ago

    by charles

    Good write! I felt exactly the same way about someone "way back when" so I can definitely relate to this one...

  • 14 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I really liked how you wrote this poem, the flow and wording is perfect. When I read it I could feel the emotions being in this situation makes you feel, I've been there, never give up hope if it's what you really want. Wonderful job 5/5 :)
    ~*Angel*~