by Christina Dec 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
How could I do it again |
I hate it when girls fall for guys that just hurt them in the end. I've been there it's not very fun. I loved when the girl go strong and told him she wasn't going to put up with his crap. |
A bit cliche... but still a good poem.. and enjoyable read with a nice flow |
Another beautiful poem! You chose really good words to go with the poem! and I loved every aspect of this poem, every verse was wonderful! Keep up the wonderful work! |
by Adelle
Ok this is a good poem however the flow was a little off and you need to find a way of keeping the reader interested as it is quite a long poem. On a good point it portrayed a lot of emotion and it could not be argued that it came from the heart. |
by Kaila
I'm so sorry |