Wow this is amazing :] im in love with this, it kinda reminded me of myself honestly there's this guy i fell in love with and all but he hurt me like 4 times so far and im afraid to let him go and im like if he does it one more time its done i mean we never dated before but we had it there you know the love and stuff, :| i dont know sometimes but you did very well with this poem.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Wow, this poem absolutely left me speechless. =O

It was great. Sad, but great. I loved the emotion coming out of it. It was very well-written, and full of emotion. Great job! 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Hey, i like this alot.
i can relate to this soo much.
as a matter of fact, im goin through it now..

but my fav on this was

why wouldn't I believe it?
it wouldn't be the first time
and it apparently wasn't your last
I just want to die

i loved this poem.. great job!!

Aww what a sad story you told.... Sometimes you can never trust boys, all they do is leave you hopeless. Well done *5/5*

This is a very good poem, darling. I only seen one thing wrong with it throug-out. The word 'herd' should be 'heard', it's in there a few times, darling. But, overall you've done a wonderful job with this.

(:

This is a really good poem. You have done a wonderful job on this poem. The flow was great. 5/5

Kalee

Wow. this was great.
and it's good your letting go
of someone who's so horrible. .
if only i had your strength. .
cuz im still trying. "/

"yes, I still love you
but it's not enough to stay
with you
you've crumbled and smashed my heart

I need to get away
and get it fixed
I've ran out of tape
to repair your damage! "

i really liked those last 2 stanzas. :]
5/5.

Wow. Lol. I liked the story behind the poem, one thing is your grammar or way of writing things. Try spelling them out completely. The stanza that I liked the most was-

"I need to get away
and get it fixed
I've ran out of tape
to repair your damage!"
Great write!

Amber :]]

This is a nice poem, it depicts your feelings well and is really relatable. One small comment though... maybe use more of a vocab. ... other than that its great. Keep it up!
mollie

I totally understand where you're comin from with this one. my situation was much the same and i left him too. it was the best thing i could have done! he's wiht someone else now and i feel really sorry for her. she'll learn soon enough though.
the man i'm with now though is 100% amazing! i've acually gone with him before and i realized i'm not quite as over him as i thought i was (my current bf). i'm glad he gave me a second chance!

Ym pplz i feel u i shed tears readin this shyt it reme of my lil sis n her nigga

Nice poem!

I LOVE THIS POEM!!! Good job! You hooked me from the start. Very nice poem!!

Its quite longer but it really means lot though.. very worded..5/5

It's very emotional and the story, I can relate to it... And the most powerful stanza is the last one:

I need to get away
and get it fixed
I've ran out of tape
to repair your damage!

Oh like your poems there about bad relationship
thats gd cause i can so use them right now!!....=)..good poem!

Nicely written, with good use of words

I'm so sorry
boys shouldn't be aloud to do this to a girl
and vice versa
I feel your pain and for a boy to say how many
that's horrible and I'm sorry you had to experience this
although it was a good poem
in some spots again there were flow issues
but it was a well done poem
5/5
take care
kaila

Ok this is a good poem however the flow was a little off and you need to find a way of keeping the reader interested as it is quite a long poem. On a good point it portrayed a lot of emotion and it could not be argued that it came from the heart.

Another beautiful poem! You chose really good words to go with the poem! and I loved every aspect of this poem, every verse was wonderful! Keep up the wonderful work!