Hmm well c... i can visualize wat ur trying to do wid dis piece... but i wud like to know more.. as in more description.. introspection .. the narration should be more than the obvious ..

I liked it! I think it would be cool to keep adding lines for every stanza you plan to add to this poem since that's kind of the pattern you have started nice job
5/5
kaila

Really good poem kalee!!! a 5/5

I liked the poem so far. i cant wait to read it when its finsihed. its goin to be a very good poem.. good luck on finsihing it!!

Well, the poem is amazing, completely flawless. But, the way it's set up doesn't quite fit it. I'm thinking maybe one stanza and some punctuation, like so;

Every night I dream
About the day,
I finally meet you.
I dream about
Looking into your eyes,
And seeing the guy
I have fallen in love with.
Of finally being able
To hold you tight.
Of the feeling,
Of your lips on mine -
As we share our first kiss.

- - - -
As you can see not one word was changed because that part is flawless. But, the flow is a bit off due to the set up.

Just a thought though.
It is your poem, do as you wish with it. (:

5.5

Its cute so far but i do think it needs a little more.....but great start! 5/5

I thought it was good! Have you fallen in love with a guy you haven't met yet? That happened to me once.

This is an interesting poem i like it.... i portrays what every girl fallin in love dreams about. nice job keep it up.
mollie

I agree this is not finished. The poem was beautiful and I want more! Everything you spoke of was easy for me to relate with. I think you can get so deeper into this with your emotions and imagery. *5/5* from me for what you got so far.

I love it so far. Send me a PM when you finish it so I can read it again! :) 5/5

Who says its not finished? seems fine to me. great work and well done, keep writing away

5/5 David