I am blown away. Yet, another powerful and inspirational piece by you- Bravo.
As a reader, it kept me drawn in from beginning to end and also kept my mind thinking about the importunacy of the message.

The beginning is amazing..I was taken off to another place in another time.The middle is so sad...very frustrating. The last part really brought about your character...and it was beautiful! I especialy loved the last two lines. 5/5

Aww.. i luv da way u ended it.. welcome to my favorite authors!