My quiet emotions

by Pink Romance   Dec 20, 2007


I always wanted more from you
than you were willing to give;
So now we've gone our separate ways
each with different lives to live.

The bond will always be there
the friendship always intact;
But the time for us has come and gone
and the pages of time, you can't turn back.

I will always be a friend to you
and wonder how you are;
The smiles and laughter I will remember
and our fights have become painless scars.

Sometimes on those busy days
when you've a thousand things to do;
Please let me glide slowly through your mind
and spend some time with you.

In that quiet moment
when you're surprised to find me there;
Just remember even with the distance between us
I am still someone who cares.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    What a beautiful flow of painless sorrow., Though I know the pain was there, It lessens through acceptance of loss and through time The ending shows that the joy once shared still remains you are very smart in your outlook in life A very good write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jay

    Girl you deadly, i love the way you word things awh you just make me melt. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    This is an excellent i really got to give you that. You show alot to what you want from that person and you show you made your decission from that. I like your ending to this. It holds a strong stand saying that you still care even if you to went in the sepreat directions. good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    In that quiet moment
    when you're surprised to find me there;
    Just remember even with the distance between us
    I am still someone who cares.
    -cute

  • 16 years ago

    by Purple

    Lost friendship is a great topic. :) Full of emotion that your poem shows subtly, and I like how you display this in a progressive style.

    From the fact that you two have separated, up to the fact you're still there for the other person, you lead one thing into another in a smooth and well connected way.

    I like your rhythm and general writing style.

    It's a good poem, but not amazing. :) Although I liked it, it did take a little effort to focus on it (may just be my brother watching scrubs behind me)...

    So I give you a 4/5 saving my 5/5s for poetry that I find truly excellent, whilst yours was just pretty good. :)

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