by KJ Dec 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The fatherless child sits and waits |
Very well written dark poem |
by P00ki3B3ar
Great flow so sad =( but beautiful |
Never will she be able to let anyone in |
An emotional piece, amazing flow, rightfully written. |
by Marc Ortiz
Well now it's a 3 line per stanza structure. You really like to experiment on things :) well that's good. If you do a lot of different things you'll really improve in the future. Keep up the good work. |