Comments : Where are we heading?

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I liked so many parts of this poem.

    Or is it just a cover?

    ^That part was easy to relate to. Good job! I enjoyed this whole piece...though there were one or two lines that seemed cliche or just overused...like asking him to give you a clue. But other than that...good job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Johnnys Medicine

    Well written
    i was really feeling the feelings of confusion and despaire
    keep it up